[中英]催款書信求建議

作者: habiba (Amen)   2014-01-17 07:17:28
請教一下版上大大
下面是一封催款的信
麻煩提供一些意見
謝謝建議~
1.長期以來,敝公司的獲利全部卡在貴公司的貸款上
Your loan payment squeeze our margin and surely cause impact on prospect
development for a long time.
: 2.過去敝公司每年有盈餘,資金也可以應付
In the past, profits and circulated funds can let us manage this situation
at ease.
3.但由於去年敝司虧損,貴公司又欠款高達300萬美金
: 若貴公司再不還款的話
: ,敝司將很難面對廠商的種種預付款要求了
: However, we were in deficits last year and the amount of your outstanding
debts
: is US$3,000,000
: If you still couldn't settling your accounts,
: we couldn't consent to your further prepayment request from us.
作者: JinSha ( )   2014-02-10 22:57:00
第一句改成For a long time, our firm's margin has long(去掉上面最後一個long) been hit by your loan payment.後面surely...的部份好像沒對應原文,另外可改成, and thishas surely damaged our long-term development andprospect.第二句Previously, our firm achieve annual surplus for(上面achieve改achieves) successive years and retainssufficient funds for handling different situations.

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