[英中] 想詢問是否有更好的自介寫法

作者: linlin57 (linlin)   2019-10-19 16:08:05
自己雖然在外貿做了好幾年,但沒有出國留學過,也都用自己的方式跟客人溝通,英文程
度有限。所以想請問這裏的朋友,關於以下的公司自介,在細節部分是否可以有更好的文
法或寫法,可以更為地道。先感謝了!
Who we are
Evelyn is a Taiwanese who had lived in Shanghai for a long time because of her
family. Due to her attachment to Taiwan, and adherence to superior quality on
ly, Evelyn decided to come back and starts a new business in Taiwan. Based on
her working experience for over ten years, Evelyn created her company here, no
t only to PRODUCE but also to DESIGN, to CREATE something supreme, for you.
Why choose us
Our mission is to make sure you can always get good design with stable quality
and receive them in time. We only cooperate with factories in Taiwan (or few
factories whose headquarters are in Taiwan), so your work is just to go on vac
ation after you place the order if you choose us.
作者: spacedunce5 (讀不完的書)   2019-10-20 23:28:00
please ask Eng-class

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