今天讀譯本
In the luminous space the tanned sails of the barges drifting up with tide see
med still in red clusters of canvas, sharply peaked with gleams of vanishingsp
irits.
在明亮的空間裏 被曬黑的接駁船船帆
隨著潮水起伏 似乎在豎立的紅色帆布群裏 動也不動
Seemed still
Seemed修飾 the tide?
Seemed修飾 the tanned sails?

(the tanned sails...tide) seemedseemed 是simple past ，不是 participle

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