履歷用詞
我會全心投入,
此外,我還期待從此工作獲得知識
我的寫法:
I would be sure to offer mine.
In addition, I expect to acquire knowledge from the job.
懇請指教!
謝謝

兩句都需要改 第一句 全心投入不要跟自己確定吧?I will fully devote myself to this new position.第二句 未發生的期待是look forward to不是expect原句會有這工作如果不能獲得知識會不符合我的期待之意

感謝^^

兩個都不是履歷用詞，該算是自傳/自薦函用詞1) I would/will be fully devoted [to XXX]2) ... I also expect to learn / look forward tolearning from this jobsorry 沒看到樓上 v 大已寫 fully devote myself to那用法完全 ok