[請益] 第一次見面的邀約(平輩)

作者: ppp237 (誠.正.真.心)   2014-07-23 16:47:11
版上各位大家好
如果第一次跟外國女生邀約該怎麼寫才比較恰當?
雙方是經由父親朋友的朋友所認識
沒有見過面但互相知道對方
由於她可能會來台灣一趟,想趁機見個面
我目前擬好的草稿如下:
I got information from Aunt, she said you will come back Taiwan for
traveling. Aunt suggested me that maybe we can meet in Taiwan. I also agree
that is a good chance to know each other. Could I invite you? If it is
convenient for you I will arrange a lunch or dinner.
Please let me know your answer or question.
這樣寫會不會太過唐突或無理?該怎樣修飾較恰當?
十分感謝各位的幫忙及指導
謝謝!
作者: vicario837 (維嘉里歐)   2014-07-23 20:43:00
第一段除了文法的小問題外(像the information)可以 我會建議把could I invite you那句拿掉 三句話講同一件事會顯得有點desperate (當然如果對方是你潛在交往對象那就沒關係) 第二段 let me know 後面可用 if it is agood idea/okay with you等 對方沒有義務要給你答案或問你問題
作者: ppp237 (誠.正.真.心)   2014-07-23 21:08:00
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