打了2個問題，
不知文法或內容是否怪怪的(文不對題之類)，
就拜託大家幫我看看唷~
先謝謝拉~
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問題一：
What events in a person's life are most celebrated in your country?
回答：
Taiwanese people celebrate in many events.
When parents have a newborn baby in Taiwan, they will have a
small feast.
If getting married, couples will have a feast, too.
In my opinion, in Taiwan wedding and having a baby are most celebrated in a person's
life.

你打完有自己先看過一次嗎？commerate? commemorate? " target="_blank" rel="nofollow">
"I mean, gifts are ..."這句也...Take myself as an example ...我覺得會比較好。第一段的結論來得有點莫名。[parents give pupils...]這邊我覺得也應該要改一下...[If getting married, newlywed couples...] newlyedcouples 是已婚了> <,前面是將要結婚> <

1. 你的回答算是文不對題。問題問的是"most celebrated"，但是你的回答過於模糊/一般性。"General speaking"意思過於廣泛(和most celebrated沾不上邊)。commemorate 也無法表達"events ... most celebrated"的意思(不是mostcelebrated的events照樣可以用commemorate來表示)。之後你「隨便」舉3個例子也於事無補

commemorate 及物動詞... "with object"present / represent? " target="_blank" rel="nofollow">

感覺像是ibt的speaking