[英中]新手上路試翻譯求修正

作者: venuskae (Venus)   2016-02-18 16:15:02
一首歌的歌詞,小弟才疏學淺,自己試翻
內容應該很有很多翻錯的,求各位前輩不吝指正。
You are right there
妳就在那裡
With the tears that's accommodating time
伴隨著眼淚,妳已經適應了那段時光
I am right here
我就在這裡
With this flare, a illuminating sign
用熊熊的火焰,照亮著我的跡象
Pins and needles both couldn't hold me down
坐立不安的感覺無法控制住我
Leaving was this choice that I had to take
我不得不選擇了離開
But there will come a time when I'll see your face
總有一天來臨時,我會看著妳的臉
So please forgive me
請妳原諒我
This butterfly, flies off the board
婉若蝴蝶,掙脫了束縛
It will find the branch of gold
它終會找到價值的一部分
So when we fly, we will know
當我們飛翔時,我們將會知道
Our days are limited
會有結束的一天
So lets learn to fly
讓我們持續飛翔吧
From the window
來自窗扉
Lights and shadows
投入了光與對映的暗影
Moves around us just the same
我們正在注視同樣的事情
I'm not under your umbrella
我不在妳的傘下
But can this distance make us close
這個距離可以讓我們更緊密
Pins and needles both couldn't hold me down
坐立不安的感覺無法控制住我
Leaving was this choice that I had to take
我不得不選擇了離開
But there will come a time when I'll see your face
總有一天來臨時,我會看著妳的臉
So please forgive me
請妳原諒我
This butterfly, flies off the board
婉若蝴蝶,掙脫了束縛
It will find the branch of gold
它終會找到價值的一部分
So when we fly, we will know
當我們飛翔時,我們將會知道
Our days are limited
會有結束的一天
So lets learn to fly
讓我們持續飛翔吧
We'll find the branch of gold
我們會找到價值的一部分
Pins and needles both couldn' t hold me down
坐立不安的感覺無法控制住我
Our days are limited
這一切會有結束的一天
感謝各位前輩指導。

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