[文法] 這句話錯誤的地方

作者: simon0731 (simon)   2022-04-06 13:07:40
如題
想請教一下,我在寫作時遇到的問題,請人批改後被註記
下面兩句話有文法錯誤,希望各位幫忙指出,感謝
Despite the two figures staying static between 1950 and 1954,
both of them started from 1920 had the opposite trends and
balanced perfectly at 50% in 2000.
In 2015, those figures had a different pattern decreasing the
gap by nearly 10%.
作者: Alphaplus (do me a favor)   2022-04-06 23:06:00
both of them ‘starting’ from‘that decreased’

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