各位大大好, 小弟英文程度不適很好, 寫了一篇英文自傳, 但不確定文法或內容有問題
能否請各位大大幫我確認一下, 謝謝
(公司名稱或比較隱私的資訊用xxx替代)
My name is xxx. I am thirty years old, live with my family in xxx. There are
five people in my family. I graduated from xxx University with the Master
degree of xxx .
I worked as an Equipment Engineer for xxx. My major task was maintained
equipment make sure the operation of machine smoothly and improved
productivity. We worked with Product Development Department, improving the
process of gold wire to achieve a cost reduction of 15% and increase the
product yield. We also worked with Testing Department, analyzing abnormal
products and offering solutions to improve product yield. This work
experience helped me to understand the semiconductor industry and familiar
with industrial production process and cultivate the ability to analyze and
solve problems.
After I left xxx, I joined to xxx. I worked in the department of process
integration and I was a member of the xxx project. My main responsibilities
include project management of New Product Introduction, established process
flow and specifications, set up reliability testing. I am responsible for
three projects and all met customer requirement. While I worked in the
process integration department, I can have a thorough overview on
semiconductor process technologies. Cross-departmental collaboration and
teamwork let me understand the importance of communication.
I'm very frank and have a strong sense of responsibility. I always work hard
to complete what my supervisor has assigned me. I am eager to face every new
challenge, and I would like to work in a company which I admire and where I
feel a sense of belonging.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am really looking forward to
being a part of your company.