[請益] 請問英文自我介紹

作者: istee (istee)   2019-08-14 13:43:46
各位版大好:
由於小妹最近剛碩士畢業,需要找工作,想找有關科技業外商的工作,因此需要英文自傳,但不確定自己寫的好不好,已經有利用google, netspeak等網頁查看有無錯誤的部分,希望各位大大能給些意見,謝謝大家。
My name is I-Ju Wang, and I was born in 1993. I graduated from Chiao Tung University where I majored in Material Science in master degree.
There are four members of my family. My father is a store owner, so I need to interact with people when I was young. It lets me become a social person. My mother is an accountant in the travel agency and is also my role model. I learned from her that if I worked hard, I won't regret anything. And I have a younger brother, we can give each other advice when we're going through hard times.
In college, I took part in many public benefit activities; For example, I joined beach cleaning and mountain cleaning activities. It not only keeps our environment clean but also makes me feel good. To cultivate a sense of responsibility, I volunteered to be a class leader and a badminton vice captain. With these experiences, I became more energetic and was able to work under pressure.
After I graduated from college, I worked at the National Synchrotron Radiation Research Center for one year. During this time, I can conduct beamline experiments, design experiments and solve problems by myself. These experiences sparked my interest in doing research, so I decided to study for a master's degree to improve my research ability.
During my Masters, my topic was "Tuning residual stress in highly (111)-oriented nanotwinned Cu". I learned a lot of skills such as electroplating, electropolishing, annealing, and carrying out high vacuum systems and vacuum cavity cleaning. At first none of my experiments working, I was under a lot of pressure. I tried to find the resolution of my experiment and worked around the clock. Fortunately, I found the method of solving the problems and was able to finish my thesis. Trouble shooting gave
me a sense of achievement and made me want to work in the tech industry.
In addition, I possess some experiences related to semiconductors. I participated in the semiconductor equipment course and realized how to operate the semiconductor equipment. I also experienced in electroplating wafers in a technology corporation. These experiences let me have the basic knowledge of semiconductors.
In order to enhance myself, I got many kinds of certificates like TQC-EXCEL 2010, C-level coach of badminton, 7th piano verification, technician for fixed crane operation, etc. I believe that I am a versatile person who can learn and adjust to anything. If I have a chance to work in your company, I would appreciate it so much and make an all-out effort.
作者: hlin12 (hlin)   2019-08-14 17:36:00
你中文面試會說: 我出生XX年?我家裡有X個人嗎?
作者: lesautres (地獄即他人)   2019-08-14 21:16:00
推樓上,其實大多數時候不是英文的問題
作者: bloedchen (Alles nur fuer dich)   2019-08-15 09:01:00
他也沒說是面試時的講稿,可能只是公司要求附上的文件
作者: hlin12 (hlin)   2019-08-15 11:39:00
重點不在是講稿還是文件,而是在於講出生幾年,家裡幾個人,對於你應徵上有優勢?
作者: posen2012 (posen)   2019-08-15 13:03:00
同意一樓…講重點 經驗 興趣 目標 期望 整理好再翻英就是盡可能在簡短的介紹中讓人瞭解自己的優點 大多主管都很忙
作者: discosoul (迪斯可魂)   2019-08-15 14:49:00
阿滴英文有一篇不錯啊
作者: cuylerLin (cuylerLin)   2019-08-16 00:58:00
主詞也不要用太多I開頭,一搜尋不得了發現有29個...沒有細看,不過第二段講家人可以整個砍掉,然後最後一段有許多感覺跟你應徵外商無關的經歷都拿掉就是了...整體的話文法錯誤滿多的...不過也許你先把架構清楚化起來再來修文法會是比較好的方式外商建議用CV or cover letter(不同國家不同稱呼)架構來寫會比一整篇要人家重頭看到尾好得多,特別還要看流水帳與錯誤文法,舉例:你講碩論那段,就可以條列貢獻與應徵公司的連結,也會更清楚,講skills那邊不需要丟一堆抽象名詞,直接列舉你做了什麼in layman's terms學會半導體器材那邊也可以明確講出學會了什麼型號功能這樣會直接凸顯你相較於其他人的優勢,直接看出鑑別度大致上這樣,沒有太多時間就不一一細看了,祝工作順利

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