You also have one of the best institution on communicable disease control -
CDC and many more top experts on epidemic control. Then, how terrible your
country deal with this conovir-19 pandimic . You have the most patients and
deaths in the world. Only one week ago your President Trump still keeps
saying mask is useless and during the predential campaign not to ask
supporters to wear masks. More recently, he urges schools to open and asks
students back to schools. All we know this will end up more kids get infected
without symptom and bring virus back to familys and sociaty. During 2009 -
2011 H1N1 out break, we closed the class with two cases and close the entire
school if more than two classes closed. We effectively subdued the
epidemic. Taiwan is regarded is one of the best to control H1N1 pandemic.
第二遍開始
重講一遍
and many more top experts on epidemic control.
相關一流專家更不可數
=..= 懂了吧 什麼叫做 許多更加頂尖的流行病控制專家
真的看不懂啊..
how "terribly" your country "dealt" with this conovir-19 pandimic.
時態
感嘆詞強化句 原句:Your country "dealt" with this conovir-19 pandimic terribly.
你得用副詞 因為你是形容這個行為 這個舉動 不是用形容詞
You have the most patients and deaths in the world.
問題我提過了 你的YOU一開始明明都是指部長本人 一下子變成了美國
就好比 我們不會問陳時中說 "你"現在有多少病患正在住院的?
而是說 "你們"現在多少病患正在醫治中?
看了會錯亂...會有 到底在供三小的感覺 你到底想跟誰講話!?
Only one week ago your President Trump still "kept"
saying "wearing a" mask is useless and during the predential campaign "didn't"
ask his supporters to wear masks.
第一 時態
第二 要嘛 就是指行為 戴口罩 要嘛就是指口罩 "the" mask is useless
第三 既然你用了對等連接詞 一邊是用動詞 過去形態 KEPT 另一邊怎麼用 不定詞
完全是錯的 not to ask !? 國中生都知道 AND=對等連接詞 一邊怎麼用
另一邊也怎麼用
More recently, he "urged" schools to open and "asked" students back"".
第一 時態
第二 前面己經明講學校了 後面提到學生回去 就不用再提了
他強迫學校開門接著要求學生回去"學校"<===這兩字就可以省略了
All we know this will end up more kids get infected without symptom and
bring virus back to familys and sociaty.
...
All we know this will end up more kids infected than ever
with no symptom and virus to their own families and our society.
第一 一個句子只有一個動詞(扣掉連接詞 and or 等等的) 這是文法書第一章的內容
你有END了 自然沒有 get 照理說 getting infected OK 但是多此一舉
就用 infected 就夠了
第二 symptom是可數名詞 然後你用without 最好用 any 對 without any symptom
照理說 and bring virus back to familys and sociaty.
bring 跟 end 搭OK 但是以英文的語法 是不是 bring 跟end 太遠
容易會讓人會錯意 對不對 所以囉 我的句子 基本上同義 但是比較好
他的原句"這將造成更多年幼者成為無症狀感染者，將病毒帶回家庭及社區"
他的"將病毒帶回家庭及社區" 主詞 懂中文的都知道 不是指"這" 而是指"年幼者"
所以說他的BRING本身就不是跟END搭 我的句子就比他更好一些了嘛 對不對
第三 familys and sociaty (families and our society.)
第四 more kids infected than ever 今天你用了MORE 意思是指更多的
大家都懂 就要跟than 之類的搭 (campared with之類的)
所以就最簡單的 THAN EVER = 比以往更... 比以往更多小孩被感染
During 2009 -
2011 H1N1 out break, we closed the class with two cases and close the entire
school if more than two classes closed.
......................
我還去查了中文 因為我真的看不懂
在2009-11年H1N1大流行時，台灣只要每班二人確診，則關班；有二班關班，
則關閉學校
During 2009 -
2011 H1N1 "outbreak", we closed one class with two cases to occur and "closed"
the entire school after more than two classes met with the same condition.
第一 outbreak
第二 時態
第三 用IF 你就要用助動詞 WILL WOULD 等等的 用AFTER就不用
第四 單純美化啦 一直CLOSE CLOSE 最多兩個啦 (除非你要搞一些文學用法
We effectively subdued the epidemic.<===終於有一句算OK的了
Taiwan is regarded is one of the best to control H1N1 pandemic.
Taiwan is regarded "as" one of the best to control H1N1 pandemic.
第一 中式英文 台灣"被"認為"是" 控制H1N1的最佳者之一
喔~~~被動式不是要加BE動詞嗎? "是"不就是 "is" 她是瑪莉 She is Mary
唉呀 是用as啦
Many people around the world know Mr. Trump is nuts. <==ok
So, if I were you, I
will resign as Secretary as HHS here in Taiwan to put pressure on Mr .
Trump to do and say things correctly.
我哭了...
So, if I were you, I "would" resign the Secretary of HHS here in Taiwan to put
pressure on Mr.Trump to do and say things correctly.
第一 假設語氣
第二 我知道為什麼他一直用as as 因為他不懂單字 why? resign=辭職 assign=派命指派
我任命tom 當美國衛生及公共服務部部長 I assign Tom as the Secretary of HHS.
懂了吧 任命指派是用assign 是搭as 但是 resign是指辭職 然後就很白話直接
我辭去這個工作 I resigned this job... SIGH~"~ 我不知道要說什麼了
To do this not only save American lives and
economy. the whole world will also benefit from this doing.
To do this not only "saves" American lives "but"
economy. the whole world will also benefit from this doing.
第一 三單
第二 我想 國中生就知道 NOT ONLY...BUT(ALSO) 還有 BOTH...AND
所以 我也不知道該說什麼了@"@...
總而言之
我才說 完全不行 真的完全不行
八成以上都有問題...
如果今天是學生就算了
但是呢
偏偏是正式公開的信件喊話
所以說 我第一眼看...
我看不懂 我還必須以推理的方式 推敲人家要講什麼 然後 為什麼會犯錯...
many more top experts<=====我真的看不懂...=..="a
ORZ...
我的天啊...
喵=w=