[創作] OK dale PTT批踢踢實業坊

[創作] OK

作者: dale (å†°åŸŽåŸŽä¸») 2019-08-30 01:03:06

I am so glad you are not OK,
but I still don't want you to die
anyway. Pick up your green duvet.
Stay warm. Stay hydrated.
Eat something.
You have come a long way
with your dissolute company.
You must sleep. Dream
long enough to meet another
day.

作者: korn31910 (ç¾…æ‹”) 2019-08-30 19:33:00

作者: sylviaplath (hate summer) 2019-08-30 20:24:00

第一句很天蠍

作者: dale (å†°åŸŽåŸŽä¸») 2019-08-30 20:26:00

記恨 sylviaplath 說我不潑文

作者: spacedunce5 (è®€ä¸å®Œçš„æ›¸) 2019-08-31 10:20:00

love the assonances!

作者: sylviaplath (hate summer) 2019-08-31 20:27:00

所以我催生了一首好詩

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