[請問] 電話中這樣詢問是否合乎外國禮節

作者: lovelyleejie   2014-08-22 00:00:34
想知道我在電話中這樣詢問是否合乎外國禮節,謝謝!!
麻煩多多指正我用詞不當之處,謝謝!!
中文:
嗨,Alex,我是Mary.
我想知道您的地址以應徵您的職缺,
有了地址我就可以自己查地圖,然後自行搭車到您的位置,
我可以帶上任何工作上需要的物品或資訊,
今天傍晚可以跟您見面嗎?謝謝
我的翻譯:
Hi, Alex,
This is Mary.
I wonder your address to meet with you for application your occupation.
I can google your address to take a bus to your place by myself.
I can bring anything or information for the job to you.
May I meet with you this evening?
Thank you!!
作者: s910928 (很少人叫我仙貝)   2014-08-22 00:03:00
就問地址 和今晚能不能面試就好了吧
作者: biup2 (biup2)   2014-08-22 00:59:00
i wanna apply the occupationplz arrange the appointment of the interview更正 plz arrange the interviw

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