綜合寫作主要是老師反駁文章提到的內容
請問寫作時能不能只提到老師反駁的點
而不提到文章的敘述
以TPO34的綜合寫作為例
The professor in the lecture is discussing three theories of the extinction
of sea cows. He disagrees with the ideas in the reading passage. He believes
that none of the three theories is correct.
The first reason why the professor is skeptical about the reading passage is
because of the too much hunting theory. He mentions that sea cows were
massive creatures, which could support a large number of Siberian population.
Hence, Siberian people were not necessary to hunt all of them. Consequently,
the professor concludes that the overhunting theory is implausible.
Second, the lecturer refutes the points in the reading article by mentioning
ecosystem disturbances hypothesis. He claims that if this disturbances did
give rise to the extinction of sea cows, it would definitely affect other
part of ecosystem such as whales. However, no report demonstrated the decline
of whales. Accordingly, the lecturer holds that the ecosystem disturbances
hypothesis is unsupported.
The third reason why the speaker in the lecture challenges the reading is
related to the fur traders explanation. He notes that the population of sea
cows was already quite small before the European arrived. In other words,
European fur traders were not the factor which resulted in the decline of sea
cows. Therefore, the speaker maintains that the fur traders explanation is
unconvincing.
Finally, the professor in the lecture casts doubt on the points in the
reading passage. He is firmly convinced that all of the three theories in the
reading are flawed.
我整篇文章只提到作者攻擊的點
而未提到文章所提及的內容
請問這樣是否適當
還是必須要一句提到文章觀點
一句提到教授觀點
例如:
it is pointed out in the passage that................,
while the professor claims that............
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