[履歷] 設計類英文自傳求批

作者: kuoggyy (哈哈)   2017-02-19 23:57:23
年後轉職...前工作是展覽和互動科技相關
下一份工作也想找類似的,但職缺很少,所以可能也會投室內設計相關
英文自傳是附在作品集resume的後面頁,簡單排了下版字數大概是一面左右
希望大家可以幫忙看看有哪裡需要修改的,謝謝
(話說寫這個真的有台灣公司會看嗎...?)
After graduated from the college, I have two years of experience in the
field of space design. The experience in cooperating with multitalented
professionals to finish exhibition projects enables me to be more
open-minded about any possibility of design. Exhibition design industry
is a fast-paced and high-pressure environment that makes me a quick
problem solver, effective communicator and a generalist designer.
In the previous work, I participated in seven bidding exhibition projects
with the team members. Most of the projects contained interactive design
and multimedia contents such as VR, AR, Kinect, projection and all those
integrated applications. As a space designer of the projects, I integrated
virtual contents with real space to create unique experience, and also
enjoyed cooperating with people from different backgrounds. With the
experience in large-scale projects, I have the ability to handle complex
situation and integrate various resource. Take the VR launch event held
by HTC and National Palace Museum for example, we overcame the site and
budget to complete a huge mirror runway stage for VR dancing performance
and lighting show in HTC headquarter within only three days.
Because of the interdisciplinary working environment, I began to learn
the logic of programming and knew how innovative technologies applied in
the commercial design and arts nowadays. Furthermore, I began to participate
in workshops related to programming and human-computer interaction such as
Arduino and Processing workshop. These new methods of design stimulate me to
rethink the relationship between user experience and space design, and they
also indicate that the virtual reality integration is the future trend in
all the design industry.
I believe that being a interdisciplinary designer is crucial in present
society in that there are enormous new technologies, materials and values
emerging continuously. So I tried to comprehensively practice design in
different area from photography to installations and from programming
scripts to constructing real space. I expect myself to be a generalist
in design with continuous hunger after new information and knowledge and
with strong passion toward professional design field.
作者: xiangming (鄉民)   2017-02-20 00:14:00
嗯...英文cv還是建議用條列式的 句型是一定有問題的
作者: kuoggyy (哈哈)   2017-02-20 00:21:00
比較像autobiography吧. 前面resume的部分就有條列了想要補充一點人格特質等比較感性的資訊
作者: RachelMay   2017-02-20 00:32:00
千言萬語不如上傳issuu弄美一點
作者: kuoggyy (哈哈)   2017-02-20 00:33:00
這是一定要的>< 想問問這種bio有沒有什麼應該避免的內容
作者: skyprayer (洗碗工)   2017-02-20 00:58:00
除非你英文程度不錯 不然不需要特地寫英文自傳而且你要有把握你的用字文法都不差 不然沒加分反而扣分當然如果你找的設計工作是外商或得頻繁用英文溝通那就加上吧 建議找翻譯社幫忙潤稿 大約500~1500搞定
作者: st9150820 (姿姿)   2017-02-20 01:02:00
覺得句法有點中式英文 也有一些文法錯誤而且文章結構也像是直接中文作文翻英文
作者: kuoggyy (哈哈)   2017-02-20 01:15:00
有參考了一些網路上的自傳寫法,但也無法明確指出是哪裡有問題...結構上是第一段簡單說明工作經驗,二三段學到的內容,最後一段是對自己的期許
作者: sc1 (sc1)   2017-02-20 02:19:00
轉行要趁早 免得又上來po資遣要不到錢文樓上住戶的意見都做到了還是22k
作者: a31415926 (Adam smith)   2017-02-20 09:22:00
well… 老實說你的自傳仍是中式英文
作者: alice78226 (紫)   2017-02-20 13:07:00
可以搜尋一下心智圖以及topic sence的東西。這兩個可以幫你重整文章內容及結構。
作者: lonelystar06 (時間會改變一切)   2017-02-20 16:04:00
英文履歷用條列式的
作者: peanutlemon (寶寶爆破專家)   2017-02-22 04:16:00
做設計的都知道要用圖片說話 拿出你的優勢~
作者: gicofe1009 (好事成雙)   2017-02-23 22:34:00
組織性不夠強,有些英文用法太中式,直接看英文母語者寫的設計履歷,很多都有線上的portfolio

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