Re: [問題] 一題句子請問英文文法是否正確

作者: Nilo (辰)   2019-09-13 19:01:05
※ 引述《LSJ1111 (ROGERLO)》之銘言
: Delicious foods can always soothe my soul, especially those that are so fa
mous
: that people need to wait for one hour.
: 想請問這個句子的文法有哪裡有錯嗎?感謝
Delicious foods, especially those so famous as to put customers in line in m
arket, sooth my soul.
加減改一下,但我認為這句話要表達的意思太多,多到不適合用短暫的插入句法來補足
意思

我覺得這樣會比較好:
I like delicious foods, especially the yummy ones that I buy after hours o
f staying in line before food stands. Nothing is more refreshing than the trophy
y waiting.
我自己的改法,拋磚引玉,請見諒。
作者: Nilo (辰)   2019-09-13 19:12:00
trophy of my waiting
作者: pptricky (蘇老頭)   2019-09-13 23:24:00
https://imgur.com/4R29Ucr 我在Resit版回的版本
作者: cjcat2266 (CJ Cat)   2019-09-14 02:16:00
我覺得有種迴路彎來彎去的感覺耶,但我也沒辦法指出個明確的點,不好意思。我的話會把用字和子句減少一些,這是我的淺見:I love delicious foods, especially those worthy of waiting in lines for hours.要確認用字是否正確,我習慣直接去google檢查有沒有native speaker這樣使用
作者: YBlueMoon (目標 真・文青)   2019-09-17 00:49:00
推樓上,讀起來舒服

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