原po弱弱高三生，
英文普普，大概都在班上中段。
從小到大沒人也教我怎麼寫英文作文，
頂多也只是改改文法錯誤。
全民英檢初級過了以後，
就去考中級。
中級過了，又去考中高級。
中高級的寫作第一次槓龜，
但還是硬著頭皮沒去補習。
然後就過了（沒被抽到？？）
轉眼已經高三，學校終於開始要求我們寫作文了。
寫的第一篇： An Unforgettable Birthday
交出去之後發現有幾個還蠻嚴重的錯誤，像是拼字之類的。
想說這下子被扣個4，5分跑不掉。
結果發回來，
X！
分數比我預估的還低啊QQ
而且有些錯誤還沒改出來啊QQ
ex: 最後面的「tragdy」
http://i.imgur.com/8uN8C8P.jpg
http://i.imgur.com/vgw6rPs.jpg
差點沒吐血
應該是班上倒數了……
後來下課去問老師，分段落的問題 ，
老師也很清楚的回答了我。
「這種低級錯誤，以後不會再發生了」
我這樣告訴自己，並開始加強這方面的練習。
不過，摔了個這麼大一個跤， 讓人實在難以放下啊。
所以啊，想請教一下這裡的大大們，
剩不到150天，
我，
該怎麼走出這死亡的幽谷？
以下附上文章
I once had an unforgettable birthday at 15. It was not a pleasure experien
ce at all. Instead, it taught me a lesson that I had never had before. It was
a hot summer day. Birds and butterflies were flying everywhere. I felt as free
as those creatures because my parents promised me to give me the finest gift
ever! I hoped it could be another dog because I wanted to find a new friend fo
r my dog, Dick. Dick was adopted by my father. And Dick and I have been playin
g together since I was a little child. As soon as I came back from school, I n
oticed something strange