[請益] 有沒有英文好的學姐能幫我看幾行自我介紹

作者: PolyCoin (亂世雌雄)   2018-08-31 20:47:00
以下是我的英文自我介紹
I've worked as a qualified nurse in the
emergency room for the WXY hospital since I
graduated from nursing college in June, 2017. In
the face of life or death situations, I am
fearless. Every time I see the pained expressions
of my patients and the worried expressions of
their families, the only idea that comes to mind
is saving their lives with an effort of will. I
am proud of my job out of a strong sense of moral
duty and hope to provide a caring environment
while on duty.
不過我擔心能力不夠所以會有錯誤和不夠口語的地方
畢竟這是我要口頭上做自介的而不是書面作文
謝謝熱心幫忙揪出錯誤的學姐們
作者: poudoudou (.. )   2018-08-31 21:16:00
覺得可以試試先用中文寫 再用google翻譯 可能會好一點
作者: minirin (all is well)   2018-09-01 00:20:00
文法跟選字都有誤,語句都不太順,你可能附上你想要表達的中文會比較容易知道改哪
作者: sugarpie   2018-09-02 00:41:00
不知道妳是做自我介紹的對象為何?是美國研究所嗎?我覺得口語介紹可以再自然一點,貼近生活一點,這樣才容易使人記得你。 這段介紹比較接近寫作文。 加油加油!(我是定居美國的旅人)

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