以下是我的英文自我介紹
I've worked as a qualified nurse in the
emergency room for the WXY hospital since I
graduated from nursing college in June, 2017. In
the face of life or death situations, I am
fearless. Every time I see the pained expressions
of my patients and the worried expressions of
their families, the only idea that comes to mind
is saving their lives with an effort of will. I
am proud of my job out of a strong sense of moral
duty and hope to provide a caring environment
while on duty.
不過我擔心能力不夠所以會有錯誤和不夠口語的地方
畢竟這是我要口頭上做自介的而不是書面作文
謝謝熱心幫忙揪出錯誤的學姐們

覺得可以試試先用中文寫 再用google翻譯 可能會好一點

文法跟選字都有誤，語句都不太順，你可能附上你想要表達的中文會比較容易知道改哪

不知道妳是做自我介紹的對象為何？是美國研究所嗎？我覺得口語介紹可以再自然一點，貼近生活一點，這樣才容易使人記得你。 這段介紹比較接近寫作文。 加油加油！（我是定居美國的旅人）