Monday Blue Buster 每週MBA生涯解惑專欄：Career Goal Essay答疑
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很少看到有人在討論文件的工程問題，來拋磚引玉一下。
Q:
大家看看我的Goal 是否有大漏洞：
I have a long term plan to build up my own software company in IT industry.
China has so many talents of software engineering, but China dose not own
world famous software companies. While, India’s software industry have
boomed up and cultivated many well-known native software firms, such as
InfoSys and Satyam. On the other side, foreign software and solution
companies, such as SAP, Oracle and Microsoft, almost occupied China’s
software industry. Ironically, they hosted their R&D centers in China and
hired a bunch of Chinese engineers. I aspire to take the responsibility to
alter the situation and foster a world-class software service provider from
China.
For this goal, first of all, I should build and sharpen my business
capabilities before 35 years old. In Intel, I inspired my potential and
learned a lot about various leadership styles, effective team work, customer
orientation, and business operation. Especially, Intel’s open and global
working environment cultivated me to be a pro-active and initiative guy with
global thinking. However, only a UNC MBA program can offer me systematic
business management trainings to improve my general skill-sets of
international business operation. Secondly, I need a business co-partner, who
are smart and passion. In a top MBA school, it will be easy to get this task
done. Thirdly, I should find out the venture capital to support the setup of
my business. So I prefer study in US for my MBA program, where it is
relatively easier to get capital support.
A:
根據筆者諮商過眾多個案錄取Harvard MBA、Yale MBA w/scholarship、Cornell……等常春
藤及top 20 mba獎學金的經驗;
以及有眾多個案以無美籍、無背景的姿態，進入美國頂尖企業如：管顧、尖牙股、PE/VC等企業任職的經驗來看，
這篇essay有遠大目標是很好的！尤其是輸人不輸陣及捨我其誰的精神，很令人景仰。
競爭力也強，能在Intel歷練。對市場觀察也有大方向了解。
但不知為何要從硬體轉軟體，也不知道最關鍵的”why you?”
還有很多細部問題。不解決是不會錄取的，也無法實現生涯目標。
下面是問題與建議：
而這篇除了無差別趨勢目標以外，主要是犯了絕大多數申請人都容易犯的謬誤，叫做「將
錯就錯」