A.
In the realms of yore, no ancients I trace,
Nor future souls emerge in timeless space,
Amidst vast heavens, my pensive mind strays,
Alone, tears cascade in melancholy haze.
B.
Amidst blossoms, a vessel of wine I find,
Alone, I indulge, no companion assigned.
I raise my cup, inviting the moon's grace,
A trio forms, my shadow takes its place.
In the realm of flowers, a wine-filled shrine,
No one beside, my solace, divine.
To the moon's radiance, I offer my toast,
Three figures emerge, a spectral host.
Through fragrant blooms, my spirits alight,
In solitude, this enchanting night.
As moonlight dances, shadows intertwine,
A sublime trinity, where realms align.
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以英文語法來看，這兩首詩大概到什麼程度？
0～100可以給幾分？
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