Re: [SC. ] PP1-74

作者: xiezl (xzl)   2014-09-24 14:39:58
※ 引述《A2GMAT (A兔GMAT)》之銘言:
: ※ 引述《fangmole (Dean)》之銘言:
: : 74.Paleontologist Stephen Jay Gould has argued that many biological traits
: : are not the products of natural selection, favored
: : "due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are"
: : simply random by-products of other evolutionary developments.
: : (C) because they enhance reproduction or survival, but
: : (D) because they enhance reproduction or survival, but are
: : 想詢問實戰上C、D的解題方法/觀念
: : 看了Ron及語法筆記的解釋仍然不太明白為何選C會造成ambiguous
: : 感謝各位版上神人釋疑!!
A2 老師的解釋也說不通。
: 這題主要是考but對比關係直接(direct)和間接(indirect)的概念,
: 我把培訓班講義部分重點先列出, 這裡在對比關係前的結構如下:
: S+V+O adv.conj S+V+O, but S+V+O
: 若選C這裡but對比關係有兩種可能
: 1. many biological traits are not the products of natural
: selection BUT simply random by-products
: of other evolutionary developments
: 2. many biological traits enhance reproduction or survival
: selection BUT simply random by-products
: of other evolutionary developments
: 因為對等連接詞but對比關係可能是針對最前面的主要子句作對比
: (S+V+O adv.conj S+V+O), but (S+V+O)
: 也可能只是在副詞子句中的對比
: S+V+O adv.conj (S+V+O), but (S+V+O)
74.Paleontologist Stephen Jay Gould has argued that many biological traits
are not the products of natural selection, favored
"due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are"
simply random by-products of other evolutionary developments.
原題目中的
the products of natural selection,
favored due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival,
是由非限定關係子句
the products of natural selection,
which are favored due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival,
轉換過來的非限定修飾語,原文根本就沒有副詞子句。
而 favored due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival
只是個過去分詞片語,哪來子句?所以絕對不可能出現第二種對比方法。
: 所以補出are只是在強調針對最前面的主要子句作對比,
: 讓對比關係更clear, 我想強調一點, C的文法沒有錯, 句意也合理,
: 只是D選項更better, 也就是句意更清楚
同時下面這種寫法
2. many biological traits enhance reproduction or survival
selection BUT simply random by-products
of other evolutionary developments
是把題目都改了,來適應自己最後的解釋,GMAT的修辭是不能這樣玩的。
: 另外想提醒一點, 不是看到not....but....就一定是在考not A but B,
: 可能還要考量子句和子句的對比關係;還有我建議大家培養獨立思考能力,
: 不是Manhattan講的東西都一定是神物, 因為再怎麼樣Manhattan也不是出題者,
: 我看論壇也發現有些解法有問題,只是比較少, 任何問題都應該按照修辭
: 的觀念來探討, 真理不就是越辯越明嗎?
提醒大家 not ... but 在這裡一定是考相關連接詞的平行結構。
來欣謝忠理老師
: ※ 引述《fangmole (Dean)》之銘言:
: : 74.Paleontologist Stephen Jay Gould has argued that many biological traits
: : are not the products of natural selection, favored
: : "due to their enhancement of reproduction or survival, but that they are"
: : simply random by-products of other evolutionary developments.
: : (C) because they enhance reproduction or survival, but
: : (D) because they enhance reproduction or survival, but are
: : 想詢問實戰上C、D的解題方法/觀念
: : 看了Ron及語法筆記的解釋仍然不太明白為何選C會造成ambiguous
: : 感謝各位版上神人釋疑!!

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