[Ask ] Is this sentence correct?

作者: dennis870927 (松山正氣哥)   2014-01-29 23:48:45
It has been half a year.
Wilbeck,my soul,alway accompany me when I study alone at midnight.
我心裡想說的:
「已經過了半年了,威爾貝克(一家咖啡店),我的靈魂
總是在我深夜獨自唸書時陪伴著我」
Is it?
作者: XGXAXYX   2014-01-31 04:35:00
我覺midnight很怪也許late night
作者: viable (《私人創作》)   2014-02-02 02:15:00
總覺得要用過去完成式之類的@@a噢看錯漏看了 有用沒錯
作者: Austinwen (溫)   2014-02-05 07:51:00
It seems kinda odd...

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