問了一下外師的看法
He paid attention to even the small details. He would work long hours each
day, editing song lyrics and planning different special effects. Many nights,
he would even sleep on his office couch.
Q: He would work long hours each day, editing song lyrics and planning
different special effects.
Is the part “,editing song lyrics and planning different special effects”
used here to “give additional or more detail information about what the
author meant by working long hours”?
A: Yes!
※ 引述《fans0390 ()》之銘言：
: 這是分詞構句的第三種用法，用來詳細解釋上一句。
: he would work long hours each day, →主要意思 (general)
: editing song lyrics →說明他為什麼工時很長 (specific)
: planning different special effects →說明他為什麼工時很長 (specific)
: 如果你用would edit 跟would plan的話，就變成三個獨立句子了
: 但你用 and he edited and he planed同樣也變成三個獨立句子
: (因為and是對等連接詞，等於你把這三個句子的重要性都設為一樣)
: =======此部份保留，原因是我用比較簡單的方式說明，但造成分歧================
: =======有想了解的話再私訊跟我說，我會完整的講明============================
: =======因為要在這邊說明的話已超過高中、大學的程度==========================
: 如果要還原的話，如下
: he would work long hours each day because he edited... and planed...
: ===========================================================================
: 分詞構句有一個重點是把比較不重要的句子降為副屬子句。
: 而這就是它在這個例題的用法
: ※ 引述《cocoland (easy)》之銘言：
: : 各位好
: : 想求助一句關於高中英文的文法
: : 不知道自己的想法是否正確
: : 句子為文章中的一句話 如下：
: : 這段主要在說這個人很認真
: : （上文 He paid attention to even the small details.)
: : He would work long hours each day,
: : editing song lyrics and planning different special effects.
: : （下文 Many nights, he would convice his wife to sleep on his office couch.)
: :