我是個安親老師，學生說要故事比賽要寫一個3分鐘說的完的故事，我能完成的只有這樣，不知道大家可以幫幫我看一下哪裡有錯嗎？非常謝謝大家！
題目是how does it feel to wake up being a .......
One day, after I finished my homework,I went to bed.
When I woke up again, I became a fox. What? Fox? Isn't me, oh no, I can't believe it. I was very scared. I didn't know why I change a fox. I left my bedroom,and lost on the street.
When I walked across the road, I met a cat and asked him"Do you know who I am? "He answered me:" No, I have never seen you," I said:"I am Wendy, a beauty girl". The cat laughed at me and said:"you? If you were a girl, then I will be a handsome boy, hahaha! "
I felt sad and left him. At this time, I met a parrot, "could you tell me how I changed back myself?" The parrot told me:" maybe you could find a smart lion that living in a forest." I walked into the forest and tried to find the lion, "where were you, Mr. Lion? ",
What happened? A huge lion said. I said :"I wanted to know how could I changed back myself? " I asked you a question, if you can answer it correct, I will tell you or I will eat you. Who is the smartest animals? The lion asked. I was too nervous to talk anything. The lion was angry at me and prepared to eat me, this time, brring, it's seven o'clock, time to get up, I changed back myself, not a fox. It was a happy news. I hate I am a fox.

其實網路上應該有一些短篇故事。大略看了一下（因為我眼睛快合起來了）時間為過去時不能有現在式，vice versa.其他都還好

其實語法與用字方面有不少小瑕疵！如果是要參加重要比賽用的，建議還是從網路或童書上挑選適合的故事來改寫，會比較事半功倍！ :-)

謝謝上面各位的意見。我再繼續找找看有沒有類似的文章

你辜狗關鍵字“桃園縣英語比賽”，有不少文章可以參考對了，找 朗讀比賽 的文章