不好意思因為自己怎翻都覺得怪怪的
想請教一下論文題目的翻譯問題
中文為：
台日高等教育學生國際移動力之比較
國際移動力（global mobility)
英文試譯：
1. A comparative study of students' global mobility in higher education
in Taiwan and Japan
2. A comparative study of global mobility of higher education students
in Taiwan and Japan
不知道怎麼修改比較好呢
懇請各位指教 謝謝

A comparative study of global mobility between highereducation students in Taiwan and Japan

A comparative study between Taiwan and Japan: globalmobility in higher education 可多google參考別人